Assignment 5: Revision
I have had a discussion with my tutor about Assignment 5 and my approach to it. I have documented this in a post summarising my feedback.
In summary:
In terms of my images chosen for Assignment 5, Andy suggested that a mixture of images in portrait and landscape formats was not so effective. He also thought that the portrait orientated images were less effective in depicting the landscape I was trying to show.
He made some suggestions about re-working this Assignment in terms of selecting landscape orientated images, and I will rework this in the light of these comments.
He also made a general comment about the way images are displayed on the website, arranged vertically. As we tend to read horizontally, he suggested ways in which the images could be shown side by side, as they would be in a gallery. He suggested this should be a consideration for my submissions for assessment.
I have re-examined the images I shot for this assignment and looked particularly at the ones in landscape format. There are a number of other images which I could include, as well as some I showed in my earlier post, but chose not to include.
Other images not shown before include these:
My tutor suggested I could show the images in pairs, side by side, and illustrated this with these two:
The rusty bucket from the machinery to the left of one image, mirrors the stone structure to the right of the other. I have made a selection of ten images which can be arranged in pairs like this.
So my revised selection is the following:
Andrew Procter 