Video meeting with Andy Hughes: 23 July 2020
Feedback on Assignment 4 – Languages of Light
As I have indicated in my posts reviewing my learning objectives, I had asked for a video feedback for Assignment 4.
In addition to getting feedback on that assignment I had a few points I wanted to discuss with my tutor.
These were:
- I will be submitting my assignments for assessment in the next weeks and I wanted to check whether any further re-working of these is needed.
- While I have used the OCA format for my learning log, I have modified it a little and want to check if this is the correct format. I am also aware that some of the posts are quite long, and wondered if some of these are going off the point of the course
- The last point is something I have been aware of, particularly since Assignment 3. I think I can express my intentions and the aims of my work verbally, but this is not expressed as effectively visually. I believe that in general my work is not so visually strong and does not always fully express what I intend as well as I can express it in words.
We had a lengthy video call which was very helpful. Andy made a number of points.
Andy was complimentary about my learning log and documentation of the work. He said he thought I had completed the coursework thoroughly. He gave as an example the account I gave of the technical aspects of light in my write up of the assignment, and the photographs of the set up for my studio work.
We had a general discussion about “quality of light” and he referred me to a Radio 4 programme with Oliver Stone in which he described using the “golden hour” for filming. He also referred to the cultural references to light, and humans’ innate fear of shadows and darkness. As an example he referred me to look at a painting Hunt in the forest by Paolo Uccello.
One of the points Andy made in our discussions which I found very interesting was his concept that photography is “subtractive” whereas other visual arts media are “additive”; ie a painter starts with an empty canvas and adds to it to create the image, whereas a photograph shows everything in a scene, and photographers often remove elements from that in order to emphasise others aspects.
Andy referred me to the work of a number of painters with particular reference to their use of colour. These were Paul Nash, Eric Ravillious and John Piper.
With regard to the exercise, Egg or Stone, Andy referred to the concept of object orientated ontology and the writing of Timothy Moreton , and which if I understood correctly, suggests that inanimate objects exert an influence on us. Thus my choice and selection of that particular stone was influenced by the stone. I am sympathetic to this view, as I did indeed choose the stone while out walking, and chose it as a piece of gritstone. I have referred to this in my write up of the exercise, and would suggest that the course notes which say “we recommend that you choose a natural or organic object such as an egg or stone rather than a man-made object. Man-made or cultural artefacts can be fascinating to light but they’re already authored to some degree” do not address that element of choice we have in choosing even a natural object.
With regard to my next assignment Andy gave me suggestions as to sources to examine for influence. These included, Allan Sekulla, Fish Story and Between the Net and the Deep Blue Sea (Rethinking the Traffic in Photographs)
Our discussions had addressed the first two points I needed to ask about. I raised my concern that my work is not so visually strong and does not always fully express what I intend as well as I can express it in words. Andy agreed with this, but appeared to regard my recognition of this as a positive point. He said it is very common for visual artists to have this concern and my recognition of it is a good starting point for further development.
Suggested sources to research
Oliver Stone, Radio 4 Documentary
Hunt in the forest by Paolo Uccello.
Paul Nash, Eric Ravillious and John Piper
object orientated ontology and the writing of Timothy Moreton
Foam and Self Publish Be Happy
Allan Sekulla, Fish Story and Between the Net and the Deep Blue Sea (Rethinking the Traffic in Photographs)
Click to access Sekula_Allan_2002_Between_the_Net_and_the_Deep_Blue_Sea.pdf


















