I had many images to chose from these are what I submitted.

This is water droplets forming on grass and moss on the moors above Glossop when covered by cloud. I chose it because it reflects the source of the waters of Glossop Brook and the humid atmosphere that attracted the cotton spinning industry to the area.

It is taken against the light to catch the light as it passes through the droplets. I would have liked better lighting of the droplets to emphasise them and make them stand out, but the sun never broke through while I was there, and I had no artificial light with me.

Paving slabs from the floors of old mills have been used to pave eroded parts of footpaths on the moors. This image shows those and reflects to me the cycle of regeneration as those parts of the old mills are now used to protect the moors that have been damaged in the past by their smoke.

It is taken on a very cloudy day and the light is quite flat, but this enhances the atmosphere of the moors.

As the rivers descend from the moors there is the evidence of hill farming. In the background the sheep. It is the sheep farming which has created the landscape we see today. That landscape apparently natural, is as artificial as the industrial landscape of the town.

Entering the town the river passes modern factories such as this. I tried to reflect here the contrast between the force of nature as reflected by the river and vegetation, and the modern industrial plant.

I struggled finding a location to get a composition of this to get the juxtaposition of the two elements. In this image I think that the foreground is cluttered and messy, and there may not be a position to get that from. It might be better to just include the modernistic appearing black factory elements.

This is Glossop Brook in the centre of the town, passing through what was a huge development of mills. Here all that can be seen in an old pipe in the bed of the river and the walls on the left of the mill complex. This apparently rural river was in fact the centre of an industrial complex, again showing the power of regeneration.

Further into the Mill complex the river is forced into artificial water course with paved bed. As it flows over that these patterns are formed, and I was attracted to the aesthetic element of this.

The patterning is perhaps small in relation to the size of the image and might be improved by better position and camera angle to enhance this.

I like to think this image encapsulates what I am trying to show in my project. At the bottom is the river. This is what caused the mills to be built here, and the remains of old buildings can be seen in the centre. On the remains of these have been built new apartments with contrasting clean straight lines.

Similarly near this mill the river is forced into a man-made course, here the contrast between the old mill building and the modern carpark is enhanced by the quality of the light. The mill in the shadow is cool and blueish, whereas the right of the image is lit by the evening sun and is warmer. The background is important as it shows where this has all come from.

 

These images are a pair. The left shows a modern retail development with clean straight lines and the incorporation of the old mill pond into the landscaping around it. The right is taken behind the buildings where the mill pond is still there, but overgrown and including the archetypal image of urban decay, a discarded traffic cone.

This shows the confluence of Glossop Brook with the River Etherow. Here the nature of the rivers has changed and they are bigger and slower flowing. Superficially this looks like a rural river with lush vegetation. However to the left of the image is the course of the Riverside Branch line which ran along the edge of the river here to other mills. Remains of the supports for a viaduct can be seen. The course of the railway is  bridle path and the landscape remains as heavily managed now for recreation, as it was for industry.

 

 

Looking down the River as it flows out onto the plain , it looks like a long standing rural landscape. However the traces of the old iron work, show that this remains a changing and evolving landscape.

I have a number of images now which I think enable me to fulfil my interpretation of the brief.
My biggest learning experience, has been to not leave it to the last minute. Unfortunately, since registering for the course, I have been away a lot with work and other commitments. I have also spent a lot of time on the course sorting out my organisation and work flow pattern to keep notes and be easily able to produce my final submissions.

I have referred to some other artists for sources of influence, but recognise that this is an area in which I need to do more work.
I have chosen several sites for my images and because of the way I have interpreted the brief they are very different. I think it would be better for my own development had I concentrated on one style for this exercise and had more opportunity to explore different ways of approaching one setting.  As a result of this I think my submission will be weak in the creativity and novelty of approach. I will adapt this in my future exercises.

The image “Glossop Brook near Calico Court and the base of old mills” is the one I believe best encapsulates the concept I was trying to show. At the base is the river, which was there before the town and the establishment of the town was dependent on it. Above this are the remains of the old mills, which brought about expansion of the town, all dependant on the river. As these have declined, they have been replaced by new buildings such as the Calico Court apartments in the upper part of the image.
The modern factory in Old Glossop, has interesting futuristic shapes, but I found it difficult to find an angle where I could juxtapose this with the river. I think that maybe it would be more effective without the river in the image, and it is enough for me to know it is there, rather than have to explicitly include it.
Overall I think the project shows different facet of the river at different points, and in that respect goes part way to illustrating the points I have tried to make. However, because they are all different locations I am not sure they fit as a coherent whole and the “backstory” needs to be explicitly stated to make sense.
I think that the images are pleasant, but not particularly striking and do not all make a strong visual impact. The Old Mill Ponds and Modern Retail Park is an example, but is in contrast to the image of the mill pond at the back of the retail park.

I would like to explore more view points and angles of the sites, to try and improve the compositions to become more visually striking. This would need more visits to each site, and going at different times to get different lighting effects. The lighting of Glossop Brook at Wren Nest Mill shows a warm light to the right of the image, associated with the modern carpark, and a cooler shadow of the old mill on the left. This use of light was accidental, but an area for more development.

 

To complete my images of the river as it passes through Glossop, I walked up on to the moors above the town and followed the course down to the hill farms and into Old Glossop.

I had hoped to get images as I envisaged in my story board, of Glossop sitting between the moors and the plain. However there was heavy cloud and I only found this lower down.

 

While waiting for the cloud to clear, I noticed the droplets of water on the grass and thought this encapsulated the source of the rivers, and the humidity of the atmosphere that allegedly attracted cotton spinners to the area.

 

I also noticed the paving of the footpaths. Many of these are reclaimed flagstones from old mills. These images illustrate how the fabric of the old mills is now being used to protect the peatland which was so damaged by the pollution from those same mills when they were in use. This underpins the cycle of regeneration and regrowth I am trying to show.

Down in the valley, the river passes through agricultural land. This is a sheep farming area and it is the effect of their grazing which has produced the landscape we now see: apparently natural, but in its own way as artificial as the industrial landscapes of the town.

Yellowslacks Brook

In Old Glossop the brook returns to the industrial landscape. But here it is of new, working factories, not the derelict mills of the town centre.

 

 

 

 

 

Glossop Brook flows through the centre of the town and is a feature of many elements of the urban scenery. I took a series of images to try and depict how the river fits into this and adjacent to old buildings and new and “regenerated” buildings. I have also tried to emphasise how the river brings the more natural environment into the town as a base for the growth of plants – planned and unplanned.

Glossop Brook near Calico Court and the base of old mills

In these images I tried to emphasise the juxtaposition of the new development and its clean straight lines with the base of the old mills underlying it with more irregular edges.

 

As the river flows through the riverside park, it can be seen that this is a resource used by residents for exercise and recreation.

Near Wren Nest Mill, a mill now converted into appartments and a retail park, the river is forced into a narrow channel, but still forms a reserve for plant growth.

 

The retail park appropriates the old features of the Mills by landscaping the old mill pond and incorporating this into the car park. However behind the shops the signs of urban decay still remain.

 

However, I think that the interaction of light and the pattern of the water flow on the paved river bed still creates aesthetically pleasing patterns. I tried to create a monochromatic image similar to those I saw in Phoebe Kielty’s work from her series “These were my Landscape” which I referred to in my account of my visit to Hit the North exhibition.